Many people argue that education alone is required for students at school however, I think that the allocation of funds for sports and entertainment is also required for the overall growth of children both physically and mentally. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy as the old adage saying children should be allowed to engage in sports and entertainment during their schooling period.The reason for this above statement is explained below
Firstly, students need some relaxation just as adults from their educational material load. They are also going through stressful exams and assignments so in order to be tension free some kind of sports and social activities will help in reviving their mental status. Likewise, today students are becoming obese due to their sedentary lifestyle therefore sport activities can help them engage with their peers. Eventually their body also becomes healthy. Only in a healthy body a healthy mind dwells. As a result, children can concentrate and study well for their exams. Thus sufficient funds should be provided for sport activities.
Secondly, social activities enable young minds to develop their talents. Each child will be different and is gifted with great talents. Besides, it is possible to find out their skills enhance their capabilities through the various social activities. Similarly, friends are essential in the development of child to a good citizen. Consequently, the confidence of students will be improved through such activities. Thus just as money is provided to libraries and classes they should also look into the sport and social activities.
Thirdly, education alone cannot make a youngster a good man there should be enough sports and entertainment for their overall development. For example like children adults also have sports and other activities conducted and initiated by their respective working enterprises. This is done in order to ensure a good and healthy working culture. Besides, companies do provide holidays for their employees for their improved quality of life which will obviously improve their work performance. This applies for students as well. Hence, colleges should be concerned equally about studies and sports.
To recapitulate, educational institutions should emphasize equally studies and entertainment activities. They are necessary for the developing child. This will reduce the stress, increase their concentration and also enhance their performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54907161804 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82854403731 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.1223134135 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9565217391 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47826086957 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129241381831 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424552322074 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048032348633 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080174111089 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293801747528 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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