Amongst the three ages of a man infant, youth and adulthood, the age of teen is the excellent era of mankind. Many people argue that an adults life is enjoyed most in their age but I would disagree and state that college life is the best of all ages.
To begin with, mans most enjoyable period begins in their college life. There are no tensions or worries of an adult to be experienced during their teens. For instance, a boy in their teens can enjoy and study alone. Planning for bigger achievements are not necessary just daily homework's and assignment need to be completed. In contrast, an adult has to make careful planning regarding the job achievements and home purchase to live happily. There are lot commitments involved in adulthood. The great moments of pleasure lie in youths.
Furthermore, a person can realize their major strengths during the college life . This will force him to choose his majors which would eventually be his job of choice. For instance , a college student who excels in math's and physics can pursue a computer course with the prospects of being a software engineer. Likewise, such person can make a good and smart beginning in their life which would eventually help him in his due lifetime. Whilst, after finishing college the decision making and further studies is all dependent on the commitments. Thus college life can make a person more oriented to his goals and dreams.
Additionally, there are more chances of cultural exchange to happen college. Besides, it would help them understand the different cultures and make friends with them. Eventually such friendships will help in his future too. Strong bonds are made during this age and the youths gain their maturity during this period. The discovery of their youth and maturity occurs during this periods. Nevertheless, during the rest of the years after college it will not be easy to make a close friendship circle. Moreover, this age also constitutes numerous life changing events if chosen appropriately would result in positive results.
To reiterate, the college life is the best period of all ages . Everyone can enjoy, take major decisions and not to mention the freedom of choice all exist in this golden period of a person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, as to, for instance, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96010638298 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59307830765 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545212765957 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4714464664 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7083333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129242310671 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408356584062 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505816659182 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832050874841 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347964615382 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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