Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal
financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Universities and colleges are the best places to enhance and develop the students social quality. It is the best place to shape a student's future. However, a plethora of people contents that Universities should provide more financial support to the classes and libraries and others disagree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelmed. Among this controversy, I personally believed that both of the fields are essential for the student for a better future. I feel this way for several reasons I will expound subsequent followings.
To commence with, sports and social activities are important for physical and mental growth. Besides, sports help us to reduce stress and provide a healthy lifestyle which is not possible in the library and classes. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I used to play basketball in the afternoon with my friends. Though those years was my turning point of career I never felt distressed, pressurized either I was happy with my life. But, when I started my under graduation, I was busy with my classes, assignment, project so much that I almost never played basketball. As a result, I felt sometimes so stressful, puzzle and discontent with my life. Thus, I think that sports and other activities are also necessary like classes.
Furthermore, Sports help us to build a leadership quality which is not possible only in the classroom setting. Moreover, they can bring a frame and reputation for the university which is lead to leadership quality. For instance, Musfiqure Rahman is one of the best players in Bangladesh. When he started his career as a player he was a student of Jahangir-Nagar University. Thus, he brought a huge reputation for the university. Moreover, after ten years of his career, he was so popular that he recently stand for an election as an EP and elated with a huge vote. Now he enters his second career as a leader.
To recapitulate, I am on the opinion that both sports and academic knowledge is important for life because one gives us a fresh mind and another provide knowledge. In addition, for a better social improvement financial support is required both sectors equally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'felt'.
Suggestion: sometimes felt
...never played basketball. As a result, I felt sometimes so stressful, puzzle and discontent wit...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... one of the best players in Bangladesh. When he started his career as a player he wa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02680965147 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94899829325 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528150134048 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8242729127 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5217391304 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2173913043 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165235329771 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482833231232 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687356685457 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098930154262 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474535582874 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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