Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There cannot be a skill more essential than the ability to plan and organize in this complicated modern world. For an average modern young person, there are numerous of options to be taken starting at the moment one arise in the morning. Video games, television, sports, family activity, and academic work are just some of those few options. However, the ability to effectively plan, organize, and make efficient use of time will immensely influence the success of a person.
First, taking myself as an example, planning assisted me in memorizing vocabulary. Prior to adhering to a strict vocabulary study plan, I memorized as much as I would like each day. And the result was terrible. A month passed and I barely averaged 3 words per day. However, since I set a plan to imprint 30 words a day onto my brain, I became motivated to study my vocabulary each day; I was spurred by the goal that I had set for myself, afraid that I would not meet the goal. At the conclusion of the new month, I memorized 10 times as many vocabulary as I did before making a plan.
Aside from attaining personal goals, the ability to plan and organize can also be a key in retaining benevolent family relationship. Consider a father of a family, who works as an engineer. If he did not plan well how much time he will be spending at work and at home, he might easily sacrifice important time he should have spent with his family. For example, the company might call him for work to accelerate a project. And because the father did not make any plan, he agrees to work extra time. Eventually, he spends little time with his family, effectively distancing himself from the family.
Nevertheless, some may argue that it is crucial to be flexible in this ever-changing modern world; therefore, a plan would be redundant. While this world is indeed ever-changing, planning and organizing is still required. This is because the situation may still be the same or similar to what was planned. Therefore, what should be done is that one should constantly make modifications to the plans instead of not using any at all.
The ability to plan and organize cannot be overstated in this modern world. This ability is the key to success in multiple aspects in this world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... the new month, I memorized 10 times as many vocabulary as I did before making a pla...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vocabulary seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much vocabulary', 'a good deal of vocabulary'.
Suggestion: much vocabulary; a good deal of vocabulary
... the new month, I memorized 10 times as many vocabulary as I did before making a plan. Aside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71319796954 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69270680686 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1508261737 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4090909091 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13784908338 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438320551989 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345440705844 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812811617119 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323036411245 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.