Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People living in societies have long been governed by rules, regardless of the time in which peopled lived in. Young people are taught to obey culturally accepted conventions, and laws require citizens to act in a certain way when a person dwells within the state. Some may complain that there are simply too many rules today and that young people should have more freedom. However, if we compare the rules confining modern people and the laws governing those of older generations, we can clearly identify that people now-a-days enjoy a much greater degree of freedom.
First consider the Chinese culture, in which a young man and a women were expected to marry according to the will of their parents. Young love birds were often deemed to be disappointed because their parents have already organized a wedding for them long before their maturity. Whereas modern Chinese youth enjoy the freedom of dating whosoever they wish; they are no longer culturally bound by the Chinese convention.
Next, dress code have greatly been liberated over the past few year. During the 1980's it would probably be considered lewd and inappropriate to even wear a mini skirt in public. Today, on the contrary, few people would consider it odd for a person to wear something as daring as a bikini on a hot sunny day. Those who do wear these outfit may even be tagged as fashionable, sexy, and desired according to modern standards. Therefore, it can be seen that today's dress codes seems to be much less restricting than it was before. How strict can that be?
On the other hand, however, people may argue that the number of written laws governing us have significantly increased over the years. While this may be true, this is actually due to the fact that so many new activities have occurred over the years, such as the use of technology or the invention of new automobiles. These new areas needed new rules to govern them. So, we cannot conclude that rules today are more strict than before just because the total number of rules increased; we must subjectively examine each activity to know if the rules have relaxed or not, as in the case of dress codes and cultural marriage convention mentioned above.
It can be clearly seen that rules now-a-days have relaxed very much when compared to that of the past, so to say that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow are too strict is definitely an overstatement. Convention in marriage culture and dress code are only two of the many rules that have been relaxed over the years. If anything, one can only argue that there are more rules to follow, as there are more activities to do, not that the rules are more strict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'complains'.
Suggestion: complains
...erson dwells within the state. Some may complain that there are simply too many rules to...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...inese culture, in which a young man and a women were expected to marry according to the...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...ve greatly been liberated over the past few year. During the 1980s it would probably be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2222.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77849462366 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46024137139 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501075268817 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6846319561 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192971125509 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593689764927 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610752147788 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111135191402 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761511279039 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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