Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
goverment should be consider about young children education. they learn many things in this period of time. they learn how behavior. they undrestang moral concepts. However, in my view, they will learn it by their family, and already we have enough program for it. I belive that goverment should expend on universities.
firt of all, The quality of education is relatet to facility of universities. many courses have been learned in universities, and each of this course need equipments. therefore, universities need money. universities have money problem right now. I will examplify my point with a true story about budget problem happend in my university. I studied computer science. I remmber in 2008 my univesity has problem to supply new equiepment for chemistry labaratory. they decieded to increase tution to earn this money. so it make a lot problems for fresh students. fresh students had to work more to pay their tution and life expence. therefore, they spent less time for study. after a semmester, university changes its policy and decrease tution again. so it is better spend money to university. universities needs more this money.
Eventually, I believe spent money for children is not good investment. If goverment spent money on university, The money will be back after a few years. The students after universities would get a job, and they will pay taxes. The money will back for the goverment. The goverment can spend this money for other uses. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light on this point. When I was young in my hometown The goverment started to construct a theater. I saw improvement face of my town. The goverment earn money from ... of theater and spend it to improve the town. In the same way, The goverment can see the result of its investment and spend that money for improve oure hometown.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-27 | SSN775 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-27 | SSN775 | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-13 | dentista1985 | 60 | view |
| 2020-01-12 | nusybah | 70 | view |
| 2019-12-25 | Armin Azad | 81 | view |
- TPO 54. The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is be 73
- extinction of sea cow 60
- TPO-54 - Independent Writing Task 3
- TPO 54 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Goverment
goverment should be consider about young children...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
goverment should be consider about young children education. they le...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...onsider about young children education. they learn many things in this period of tim...
^^^^
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ucation. they learn many things in this period of time. they learn how behavior. they undresta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...arn many things in this period of time. they learn how behavior. they undrestang mor...
^^^^
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...eriod of time. they learn how behavior. they undrestang moral concepts. However, in ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eriod of time. they learn how behavior. they undrestang moral concepts. However, in ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firt
...verment should expend on universities. firt of all, The quality of education is rel...
^^^^
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...is relatet to facility of universities. many courses have been learned in universiti...
^^^^
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...nd each of this course need equipments. therefore, universities need money. universities ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
...ts. therefore, universities need money. universities have money problem right now. I will ex...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...university. I studied computer science. I remmber in 2008 my univesity has proble...
^
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ew equiepment for chemistry labaratory. they decieded to increase tution to earn thi...
^^^^
Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... to increase tution to earn this money. so it make a lot problems for fresh studen...
^^
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...crease tution to earn this money. so it make a lot problems for fresh students. fres...
^^^^
Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fresh
...make a lot problems for fresh students. fresh students had to work more to pay their ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 628, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...e to pay their tution and life expence. therefore, they spent less time for study. after ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 671, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...refore, they spent less time for study. after a semmester, university changes its pol...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 747, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s its policy and decrease tution again. so it is better spend money to university....
^^
Line 2, column 790, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
...it is better spend money to university. universities needs more this money. Eventually, I b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... The money will back for the goverment. The goverment can spend this money for othe...
^^^
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ence may shed some light on this point. When I was young in my hometown The govermen...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, in my view, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95498392283 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73431626804 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543408360129 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5740028595 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.7096774194 100.406767564 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.0322580645 20.6045352989 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.93548387097 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227449494269 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669468499028 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619669208573 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148736900082 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680203302559 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 58.1214874552 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.95 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.