Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool (early childhood education programs, for example, for three-year-old children) at no costs for children’s families.
Use reasons and examples to support your position.
When asked about whether government should provide gratis preschool for children or not, different people have different answers. There might be some people who believe that government should facilitate for children to attend preschool. However some people have a negative attitude on this issue which points out that there are several disadvantages that children can attend free preschool. Although there is much controversy about this topic and without any doubt if government establish free preschool , there is chance for poor families whose children be educated in such class. I strongly feel that state should not present free education to preschool children. From this perspective, My opinion is based on financial, personal experiences.
First, in my financial view, providing free class for children causes extra costs imposed on government. For doing this, a lot of teachers and trained forces must be employed and this means that it require a lot of money and time to fulfill this goal. So i think state can do a better work rather than these expenses and for instance this costs can be spent on medical treatment. For example , in my country thousands of people die owing to the fact that they don’t have enough money to expend for their illness.
from a personal perspective, i think that these educations cannot help the child to grow and only due to parent's mentality children sign up in these education. For instance, in my family we have two children that one of them went to preschool and another do not. in the next year, when they had finished first class, the child going to preschool take a less grade. So because of it I think that attending preschool do not have any educational advantage. So spending money on thing that is not useful is preposterous.
It is undeniable that sometimes and in specific situation free preschool can help some families for different reasons. However, everything has its two sides. When I compare the advantages and disadvantages of this idea, the advantages will be limited into a low level. All the factors above determined me to conclude that government should not pay any cost for preschool.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235443037975 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.172151898734 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0835443037975 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405063291139 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405063291139 0.0685040099705 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13164556962 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0379746835443 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71074867493 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253164556962 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00506329113924 0.00188951952338 268% => OK
Determiners: 0.0835443037975 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0303797468354 0.0209618222197 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177215189873 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2175.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05849582173 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350974930362 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272980501393 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214484679666 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136490250696 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71074867493 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545961002786 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.0863938261 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8947368421 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1116146704 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.473684211 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.54480286738 397% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.1927869814 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.6 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313978383591 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0954042938438 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0784525672439 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459586731893 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108216461937 0.151897553556 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114686882198 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697218357957 0.0781384742642 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296317802689 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0165564885895 0.067059652881 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216795209364 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029385800215 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.