Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
The question is whether people should accept an offered secure job immediately without waiting for another job which will make them satisfied or not. Everyone in consideration to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this issue; however, I am inclined to declare that advantages that suggested job will bring us outweigh its disadvantages and it is able to provide merits in current time for people. I feel this way for some reasons which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
First of all, nobody could overlook this fact that world has changed and this condition have affected the societies. Nowadays, humans are wrestling with economics, political, social troubles. It is true that our community has been optimized in compared with the past; however, new problems also have taken root. One of the biggest problems in the overwhelming majority of countries is the unemployment particularly in the developing countries; hence, refuting such a great propose just because it is not our interest, can seem ridiculous. Paying bills, university's tuition, supplying ingredients for food and so on, require much more money from us; therefore, a logical mind affirms to accept the aforementioned job until we find our favorite job.
The second reason for my argument is that in such a technology- driven world, people are competing with each other to obtain different experiences. It goes without saying that more experiences will assist the young to keep up with the society's knowledge. In comparison with the past era, today's companies require several skills from their employees; consequently, in 21th century, time is crucial as much as gold. Every job or task, even though we do not admire it, includes a wide range of data and experiences which help us to take advantage of them such as working under different circumstance, communicating with diverse human beings and list goes on. In short, having a productive resume is bedrock of achieving prosperity.
Moreover, finding a satisfied job can take a long time. Based on psychology researches, when a person stay at home for much more time, his personality would change to an idle person and lethargy feeling, depression and even suicide thoughts will overcome him.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that in the current situation of world, waiting for a magical beast to provide our dream can be silly. Without working hard and testing a variety types of jobs, one will not be able to acquire his needed experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...keep up with the societys knowledge. In comparison with the past era, todays companies req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, i feel, in short, such as, first of all, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11778846154 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80212068195 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622596153846 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2509727553 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0625 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224086572582 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678859316122 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495055695338 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114754922229 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286076160922 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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