Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, human beings, particularly young people, have faced difficult situations in which require true decision. Moreover, making decision always requires someone who can underestimate all aspects of choices. In this regard, a contentious question arises and that is who the best person to consult with is? Should young adults make decision on their own or listen to their parents? In my opinion, parents are the most important and influential people in every individual's life and without their advice, children are slightly likely to pave their ways in success. However, in some special circumstances, parents should not be involved and youngsters have to choice. In what follows, I will explore my double-side point of view about this issue.
First off, one should take into account this undeniable fact that parents are more experienced compared to children in some problematic conditions. They might have been in similar occasions and they are aware of all repercussion of making decision. Thus, they are more likely to show children better ways and consequences. For instance, take my brother as an example. He was about to getting married with one of his classmates who was not so well-behavior. He did not know that whether he has made a right decision or not. He came to my parents and consulted with them. However, my parents allowed him to put himself in such marriage, they gave him some advice that ended up to finish his relationship with her. If he went through this marriage, he would definitely made himself myriad problems.
On the other hands, there are some situations in which parents cannot help their children and children should consider their desire and favor solely. By that I mean, parents do not have enough information to help them out and if they engage in their children decision, their children might have gotten regret. Either parents or some other people who are not informed enough could make them a lot of troubles. For instance, children are about picking up their favorite major course in the university. If their parents, either intendedly or unintendedly involve themselves or make them to do according to their own desire, children will definitely loss their motivation and they will be less likely to be prosperous.
To put it briefly, contemplating both sides, one soon realizes parents should interfere themselves in some decision, however, their presences are not needed in some occasions. They should have an eye in both sides. Thus, I strongly recommend that parents distinguish between when they should choice and when they should not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...portant and influential people in every individuals life and without their advice, children...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er he has made a right decision or not. He came to my parents and consulted with t...
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Line 3, column 767, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ough this marriage, he would definitely made himself myriad problems. On the othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i mean, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16075650118 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71894951858 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520094562648 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6542271235 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9583333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239849064523 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723442556324 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776261471929 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147128802243 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866853647302 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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