Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there would be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Cars are vehicles meant for human transportation on roads. Some would argue that in twenty years there will be more cars than there is today. But some others would state that the numbers of cars would experience a decline. After weighing all the evidences, it is clear that the numbers of cars in use would be reduced come twenty years. Technological, Economical and environmental factors would necessitate and cause this reduction in cars usage.
One of the major issues in the world right now is environmental degradation. Various human rights agencies have been fighting for this cause and enligtening the populace on the degradation of the environment by human actions. Cars are one of the ways through which human causes environmental pollution. One of the solution proffered by these group is the abandonment of cars for bigger buses and the establishment of mass transit. Developing countries like Nigeria would put these changes into law and it's just a matter of yesrs before these greatly affects the populations of cars in usage.
Secondly, with the rate of technological advancement, there would be a shift from road transportation to other forms of transportation. Technological advancement would cause the proliferation of high speed and convenient railways that cost less for travelling long distances like we have in China and Singapore. People would prefer to board a train by which they have time to perform other activities such as reading and they can as well sleep during their journey, rather than the stress of driving hundreds of mile to work. Technology would also engender the construction of more airports, which provides the fastest means of transportation. The presence of various airports even within states would draw traffic from car usage to air transportation unlike today where you have feweer number of airports plying majorly inter state routes and not intra state.
Thirdly, as the years go by and inflation rise is accompanied with a reduced value for money. The purchase and maintenance of a car becomes quite high for people to bear. People would have to resort to alternative means of transportation such as waterways and rail. This would greatly reduce the purchase of cars as people have a more cost-effective means of getting to work, home or school. An average commuter would prefer using the rail system which would prevent him from the periodic purchase of gas, servicing of his cars, car insurance, parking ticket and other costs that are associated with the ownership of a car.
In conclusion, As explained by the effect of technology, environment and economy on the usage of car as a means of transport, it is clear that the number of cars in usage would reduce in twenty years time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0796460177 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89922296038 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5003467395 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207947088349 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713253044262 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644700735425 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13133223135 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669768014273 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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