Wheel has an important role in the human evolution and civilization. Back then in ancient times, people used animal pulled wagons to travel and transport. Presently, we are using engines to pull a wagon. Cars, nowadays are an imperative factor in a day to day life of a person. As the population is growing, the demand of cars is also increasing. Cars will be used more in upcoming times than now, so I disagree than there will be fewer cars in twenty years. I feel this way for several reasons which I will expound in the following essay.
To commence with, it is a basic requirement of a small family of 4-5 persons. The applications of a car lies in a wide range from going to office to going to movie on weekend. Living in a developed country without a car is very difficult for a person with family. There would be many constraints if he or she does not own a car. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. One of my uncles lives in the United States. In his starting days at the US, he did not a car. Moreover, his job was quite different and he had to visit many places. Using public transport was not beneficial as he had to make uncertain and sudden visits. After few months, he bought a car which helped him doing his job better. Therefore, in upcoming time, the importance of car would be more so there will be more car then today.
Secondly, factors like technological advancement, open market, and globalization will rise the competition for the car companies, which will lead to the price drop. This is going to be more prominent in the near future. The less the cost will be, the more people would purchase it. People will prefer cars over the public transportation because of the easiness and comfort it provide. The cars can be drove anytime from anywhere. To save the time and make the travel more better journey, cars are preferred over public transport.
Finally, the developing countries are a great market place for international car companies. Countries like India, Pakistan etc. have good potential buyers. The companies would like to take a chance for these countries. Moreover, the car rental companies like zoomcar, uber, ola etc. are also strengthening their roots. People are choosing them instead of buying a car. The marketplace for these companies is also getting boost due to foreign investment in developing countries. This will result in more cars in next twenty years.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the number of cars in next 20 years is going to increase. This is because of some political, socio-economical and personal factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...would be more so there will be more car then today. Secondly, factors like techno...
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... because of the easiness and comfort it provide. The cars can be drove anytime from any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72307692308 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73507278023 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536263736264 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9994708943 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.4 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54285714286 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278833167709 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590596270056 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764665335194 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145797059197 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757190370144 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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