Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that benefits of having a car in future will make it necessary to exist in human being life more than today. On the contrary, there are still those who argue that number of cars will be reduced in twenty years compared to today. I, to a great extent, agree with this popular belief that not only will the quantity of cars not be decreased, but also people will use their own vehicle more than today, due to couple of reasons.
First and foremost, people will be lazier in twenty years in comparison with today. Their needs will be increase. Due to achieve their goal and obtain their needs, people have to move. They will avoid to pass their daily life in hard situation such as walking. Thus they will not choose walking toward their destination. In my point of view, each person probably will use their own car. For example, people who went to fast food stores to buy something to eat, parked their cars in the parking space and walk toward the store. Unfortunately most of them was overcrowded and it was hard to find a parking space, so some of them went there by walk. Today people can buy their food from drive thru even faster and easier than before. It will change and switch into easier way in future. So can be stated as a very strong reason that people will be lazier in twenty years. Therefore, number of cars will be increase.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that, car factories will be able to produce high quality cars which do not need the use of any driver. The technology of cars might be change. These kind of changing provide variety of benefits that cannot be easily overlooked. On the other hand, adults will be extremely busy in twenty years. Parents will not allocate time for their children and they will not give them ride to reach somewhere such as their school, classes and so on. Consequently they will buy an automatic car for each child and make the number of cars increased.
On the basis of points mentioned above I am inclined to believe that number of cars will be by far more than today. Now people are lazier than past. In my perspective, they will be lazier in twenty years compared to today. In this case, they will use their car more than now. In addition, children will use their own car which is totally automatic and does not need any driver.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid passing'.
Suggestion: avoid passing
...r needs, people have to move. They will avoid to pass their daily life in hard situation such...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...life in hard situation such as walking. Thus they will not choose walking toward the...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to walk'.
Suggestion: to walk
...h as walking. Thus they will not choose walking toward their destination. In my point o...
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Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... will change and switch into easier way in future. So can be stated as a very strong reas...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...The technology of cars might be change. These kind of changing provide variety of benefits...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...uch as their school, classes and so on. Consequently they will buy an automatic car for each...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they will use their car more than now. In addition, children will use their own c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 9.8082437276 285% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54098360656 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22645324323 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487119437939 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0596927174 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5769230769 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4230769231 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42307692308 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291395397179 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104117594426 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648426853527 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223306918312 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035411005722 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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