Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, having internet access is essential for some people to the point that some individuals believe that the government should guarantee internet access for everyone, even if this was at the expense of other services that the government offer such as public transportation. However, I disagree with this opinion. In my view, I think that public transportation is still far more important than internet access and officials should provide the sufficient resources, including funding, to improve it. I feel this way for many potential reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, a functioning public transportation system is crucial for the day-to-day lives of citizens as it solves many problems which the community could face without it. Disabled and low-income people depend on public transit like buses and trains to go to work. Economically disadvantaged families cannot afford to purchase a private vehicle. As a result, they usually take the bus to work or school. In addition, young people, who most of the time work minimum wage jobs, make very little money which is not enough to buy a car. Moreover, individuals with special needs find public commuting the most convenient way for them to move. For example, people with low vision who are not able to drive will benefit from public transport. Furthermore, making sure that public transportation system is in good shape will definitely encourage people to drive less. Consequently, less automobiles will be on the road, which will help mitigate traffic jams and air and noise pollution. Based on the aforementioned facts, internet access is not as significant as a reliable public transport for people and elected officials should dedicate more of the taxpayers' money to maintain an efficient transportation network.
Secondly, the internet is not as essential as commuting in everyday lives of humans. Although smart phones and internet access gradually becomes more of a necessity, some people prefer to turn off their phones for some time or not to have a smartphone at all. For instance, the 24 hours access to the internet through mobile phones is not affordable for most people in my home country. Therefore, a large proportion of the population have phones but no internet access. They do not really complain about the lack of internet connection. Instead, the political debates are mostly about infrastructure and public transportation. Hence, public transportation should be the priority for governments before considering internet access for everyone.
In summation, a reliable transit network is much more needed than internet access to all and taxes should be invested in improving bus and train routes as this will help tackle many issues faced by our modern society. Also, some minorities will find it easy to cope without internet access but it will be hard for them to go on with their daily activities without public transportation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...on public transit like buses and trains to go to work. Economically disadvantaged fam...
Line 5, column 878, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun automobiles is countable.
...age people to drive less. Consequently, less automobiles will be on the road, which ...
Line 5, column 1059, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'reliable public transport'.
Suggestion: reliable public transport
...nternet access is not as significant as a reliable public transport for people and elected officials should...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxpayers'' or 'taxpayer's'?
Suggestion: taxpayers'; taxpayer's
...d officials should dedicate more of the taxpayers money to maintain an efficient transpor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...activities without public transportation
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25847457627 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91088973521 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6158233313 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.913043478 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5217391304 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82608695652 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269308030365 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773114953781 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540365005495 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183971124777 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657586714543 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.