Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people think that keeping the connection with the old friends is more importance than making new friends. The issue is a controversial one, but in my opinion, a closer examination reveals that it's more crucial to expand the network with new people for several reasons. In this essay, I will explain my position providing examples to support my claims.
First of all, the more people we know, the more benefits we get. Each person has various kinds of knowledge and resource. For example, the doctors know well in the hospitality, but may not expert in art. Normally, people cannot perfectly do anything well by themselves; people need helps from others. For instance, one of my friends, who is a dentist, need to get a patient for her examination case. She couldn't find the patient until the last week before the exam, so she walked into the engineering club, asking to join the volunteer program. After couple days in the engineering club, she gained many new friends and finally got the patient for her examination. Clearly, making new friends is beneficial.
Secondly, knowing new friends can help people learn new aspect in life. People cannot get any new perspective by spending time with the same old people or activities. In contrast, the more exposure to new societies or communities enhance the experience and, as a result, people grow. For example, my sister was very shy and didn't like to meet new people. She always has the problem dealing with people. However, after a trip of her internship aboard, she was force to know new people, such as her colleague and her boss. Now she became more confidence and more happy with life than ever before.
In summary, while there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages making new friends because of the above mentioned reasons. Certainly, expanding the network is more crucial than spending time to keep the old friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
...a patient for her examination case. She couldnt find the patient until the last week be...
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...For example, my sister was very shy and didnt like to meet new people. She always has...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248677248677 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.137566137566 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100529100529 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449735449735 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0582010582011 0.0685040099705 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121693121693 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.026455026455 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53551924199 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0873015873016 0.0887237588012 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132275132275 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0026455026455 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1932.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87234042553 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355623100304 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267477203647 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161094224924 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100303951368 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53551924199 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568389057751 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 62.3173774838 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.45 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4648734221 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.1977203647 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.64835164835 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334702912722 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0914148545117 0.103427244359 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0744339602631 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460933751354 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166146210218 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122812926132 0.114077575197 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750139178594 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.328707406907 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0955081643509 0.067059652881 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252449639545 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553687572412 0.0618886996521 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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