Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern transportation and shipping has made the world a better place to live.
Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Transportation and shipping play a vital role in the economic and social development of any society or any country. I personally think that modern transportation and shipping have benefited our society in a myriad of the way. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore below.
The first and most significant reason is it has made our life more comfortable and fun. Let's take the example of an airplane. How it has made our life so easy. Suppose, I want to go to my country India to see my sick mother and I need to return in two days. Here, I have a plethora of options to go and returned on time. Similarly, suppose, my children, are demanding to go shopping in Europe on this black Friday. I can totally fulfill their dreams, I just need to have money for it. On the other hand, our ancestors faced so many problems because of slow transportation, when Swami Vivenkaand ( first Indian came to the USA) came to the United states first time, it took him about three months to reach here. When I came about this fact I was really thankful for modern transportation like an airplane.
Morever, recently developed fast shipment is so convenient for those, who used to ship a lot of stuff from their country such as local food, local ethnic dress. For example, last year I shipped a new ethnic dress for my daughter from India. She was super happy to have it. Additionally, fast shipment is not only given pleasure but it does play a crucial role in meeting deadlines for submitting an application on time. For example, one of my friends wanted to have her transcript from Germany, she got it in just two days.
In summary, I strongly feel that modern technology affected our lives in good ways. It has made our life easy and more fun. Morever, for students its major convenience especially in putting the application on time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, similarly, so, for example, i feel, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62424242424 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65582506864 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3643858109 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805388660818 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277858466247 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327596057922 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594548726373 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325545944425 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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