Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By and large, it's established beyond the doubt that advertisment is the one of the important factors for attracting the customers, so, the comanies need to be organized in this context for supporting themselves in the business. As matter of the fact, nowadays companies are aware about the knowledge of customers; hence, they try dramatically to demonstrate their quality in the rightway. After regarding different factors into consideration, I totally support this notion that advertisments should show the truth, thus, I am not agree with this idea that most advertisments make exageration for showing their products. In the following, I will elaborate more details to explain my point of view.
The first exquisite points need to be mentioned is that people are more aware of the quality of each products. A plethora of people are of the opinion that the best advertisment will attract the more customer, therefore, it is noticeable to be considered that according to the knowledge of the customers the policy of the companies for semonstrating their ability have changed. By way of examples, in the past, due to people were not very knowlegable about the products, their quality and value, so, the companies for being winner in this competition, they always exagerated about thie products and convienced people with gifte if they bought their products. This policy have altered because today people never put themselves and thier health in the detrimental situation just because of gift or etc. The awarness of people limite the companies to the condition that if they want to be successfull in the competition, they should try hard and improve their quality in rightway. Thus, in the advertisments, they will demonstrate the trust.
There is another factor that deserves some words is that the government policies are in the conditions that supports customers. If the companies need to achieve reputation, they need to acquire the confirmation and certification from gavrnment organ. According to the survey has been conducted by experts demonstrated that todays people are of the conviction that if the government let the companies to ad their products, so, they are reliable because have standard in this context. Consequently, the reliance of people to the government is very considerable and enhance the companies to obtain the best standard for conviencing their customers.
To put it all in nutshell, by considering all aforemention reasons, I believe that todays companies not only try very hard to acquire the certifications but also need to be up date an account of customers knowlegde and persuade them just by their quality. As a whole, companies for being succed need right ad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 531, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s should show the truth, thus, I am not agree with this idea that most advertisments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2269.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21609195402 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00594909323 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473563218391 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.7674194882 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8125 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1875 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799441425763 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292228646133 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347502073349 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510258465676 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407071581542 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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