Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
When it comes to the issue of the best way parents can help their teenage children prepare for the adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job, Some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Although those opponent could have their right to believe in. I believe that the part-time job is the nest way in which parents can encourage their children to prepare for adult life because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that parents can help their children prepare for the adult life by encouraging them for the part-time job. If the children pay from their own salary for the things they want to buy, they will understand the value of the things . Eventually, this will help them to learn how to earn and save money.
Another reason why I advocate that parents should encourage their children for the part-time job in order to prepare them for the adult life. The life is very rapid now, to get good position in the future the person should prepare himself early. When the child work early he will learn new skill which will help him in the future. additionally, he will learn how to communicate with people from different ages and make friendship with them. All these things will provide many advantages to him in the future.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that part-time job in the early life will help the child to know which field he found himself in and which career he is looking for it in the future. So, the child will know what he is really like and how to improve himself to reach his goal.
From what has been discussed above, we will draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinion are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60714285714 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31769487077 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472527472527 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3458682843 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403675139045 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142128943434 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166877582193 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215997326919 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155601095345 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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