Traveling is what most of the people need feeling alive spiritually and mentally since it is a powerful way to revive our impetus to move forward dealing with life's vicissitudes. Some people believe it is better for them traveling in their own country, but others contradict. I must admit that my opinion is that we are in need of taking a journey to abroad for using the advantages of traveling. I can say this on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
First of all, it provides the tremendous possibilities having phenomenal moments since you can go beyond your comfort zone, what you tried before, and what you touched by your heart about life. For instance, that was what I experienced on my first journey to Malasia ten years ago. I had an intense feeling which I had never had before the time, even though my trips within Iran stuck in mind substantially, but it was barely comparable with walking into Kuala Lumpur's street for the first time. It made me feel that I wasn't a stranger in the world anymore; I felt that I belonged to my planet regardless of the races, ethnicities, boundaries, and languages. If I had not such travel, I wouldn't have had such extraordinary emotions about the unification of the human kind all around the world.
Additionally, I believe what you perceive and discern about the various nationalities, and their living style makes you turn to a sophisticated character and change your perspective about life. For example, a couple of years ago I joined to Couch Surfing which is a site for travelers who want to meet local people in the destination. Most of them are professional adventurers, and I can confidently say that they are at least ten years more mature versus their peers. Traveling all around the world carve them to be flexible, companionable, and cordial individuals. It makes them comprehend how dealing with the world tenants despite the restrictive and discriminal legislations which already are run by the governors. I am of the conviction, traveling out of the limitation and borders have a huge impact on our personality and intuitions about living.
All in all, I am certain that traveling out of our home countries is more beneficial and awe-inspiring for steering communication skills and recognizing we are all unified as the humans in this magnificent planet. I suggest that everybody consider doing such thing to join the global humanity circle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: wasn't
... the first time. It made me feel that I wasnt a stranger in the world anymore; I felt...
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... languages. If I had not such travel, I wouldnt have had such extraordinary emotions ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92892156863 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95508862461 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55637254902 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3315353467 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.294117647 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161001925563 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504036516093 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437879395949 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102630477514 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351460239608 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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