Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today work fewer hours and have more leisure time than previous generations did.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there is no doubt in the fact that whether the current generation or our ancestors worked or not but what arises doubt in mind is the question who worked more than other generation. Personally, I believe that present generation have been giving more efforts. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, today's era has become materialistic, which means people have the craving for having more and more things. people today have innumerable desires and wanted to accomplish them as fast as possible, making them to work hard day and night to fulfill them and forgetting all about their other pleasures of life. For example, my elder brother who has just been employed in the company is very precipitous in achieving all things which he dreamt off, since his childhood. he wanted to buy a car of his own , a bungalow and what not. However, all these things won't come for free and require money and due to this my brother have made his life so much busy that he does not have time to even call parents and ask for their well-being. Hence, due to the increasing desires of people, they are becoming more and more engaged. Secondly, now there's a sense of competition been engendering in the minds of people. Earlier people used to live a bucolic life and have their concerns regarding only to get their meal on time and they are not much cosmopolitan, but now due to the development of many countries, developing countries like india, China are promoting their citizens to work day and night in order to surpass the leading nations of the world. The country in which I am living is a compelling example of this. In my country, india government are making policies in order to lure public to work round the clock by making use of the nationality. The government is inciting the sense of competition with other countries and making them to perceive every other nations as their rivals whom public will defeat with their efforts. As a result, citizens are more embroiled in working hard leaving back all their happiness in their lives. Therefore, the increasing awareness about globalisation is making the people of developing country to do job for extra hours. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that current era is working more blindly than our ancestors. this is because everyone have become the victim of materialism and have myriad of desires and because globalisation is inciting the sense of competition in their mind making public to be industrious and not take rest until they have defeated their rivals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76297968397 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316324715 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496613995485 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6495242202 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6111111111 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168802143714 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580170810569 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453858343566 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168802143714 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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