Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the future, a majority of people will work from home.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The advent of internet has provided the option to work remotely without being present physically. therefore, the question of how the employees will work in the future has become imperative. personally, I believe more number of employees would be working from home. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, work from home is really comfortable, which increases the productivity of the employee. At home, a person gets liberty to do work from anywhere he wants to, like it is cold outside so the person can work by sitting in the warmth of his bed. For example, as I am employed in computer science field, most of the times I skip going to office so that I can get the liberty. Moreover, by not going to office I am saving the travelling money and also my time which has been consumed while commuting. Instead, I can use that time to complete my office work and get some more free time to enjoy with my family. therefore, whenever I choose to do my job by sitting at home, I have plenty of time to do some other household work and have sufficient time to spend with my family, which also improves my productivity. if I do not choose to work from home, I would not get the ample time to spend with my family and I might be not happy in doing my work.
Secondly, companies also prefer the working remotely trend, which saves an appreciable amount of money for the company. By making the employees to work from home, organization are freed from the responsibility of building a office space for the person, giving medical insurance and also other benefits that an employee should have but now the industries don't have to make such allocations, thus saving a lot of funds. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. my father runs a construction company, where there is no department for the architectures. Actually, in order to increase the profits my father have made the architect to work remotely, which is saving space in the company to do some other work and also my father don't have to provide additional benefits to the employees. he just needs to pay them when they complete their given work. therefore, if this trend continues more number of employees would have to submit their work remotely as the industries would make heavy profits by not having the burden of providing facilities to the working class.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that in future work from home will be a commonplace. this is because it gives some leisure time to person to spend time with family and because organizations have the oppourtunity to save plenty of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6688172043 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66605091746 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460215053763 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2265261141 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175447404788 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691913949385 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536285592405 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122426507495 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256252192103 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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