Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
In order to learn something we need to be hard-working until we reach our desired goal. However, there is a strong debate between the method of achieving the goal of attaining the knowledge. personally I believe, studying under the guidance of teacher is the optimal way of learning. I feel this for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Whenever we take a task to complete it's natural that at first we are motivated in engaging in it but as the time progresses we become more and more bored by involving ourselves in that job. we are always ready to start the work thinking that we would complete the job by doing it regularly in parts but our level of interest surge as the time passes. therefore, resulting in unable to finish the work before the deadline. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. when I was in first semester I have taken mathematics course to study calculus. As the subject proceeds the chapters become more and more elusive making me feel that I have made a mistake and I would be failing in the subject. As a result, I discussed with the concerned faculty and she encouraged me to be industrious and do not be crestfallen, if I did incessant efforts regularly I will definitely pass the subject. Moreover, she provided me with a study plan through which I ultimately passed the subject with good grades. therefore, the presence of teacher is very important to boost the morale of the student.
Sometimes we are trapped in a situation that we are not able to come out of it despite our efforts. A scholar studying hard but still not able to get his desired score is a similar situation which can make him lose his self confidence. For instance, when my brother was preparing for his GRE exam although completing the entire syllabus was not able to reach his dream score. Then he went to a tutor who understood his problem and guided him to make him aware of his weak points and make him practice on them rather than following a rigorous routine to study for the exam. Consequently, with just a week's effort he was able to get his dream score. Hence, the presence of a teacher becomes a necessity in making us learn the right way.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that studying in the presence of a tutor makes the process of learning a lot more manageable process. this is because he not only exhorts us throughout the sessions but also gives a study plan to follow and because he made us aware of our shortcomings and make them our priority to fix them in order to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56644880174 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63318580579 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9464837075 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8095238095 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962920644348 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308080715657 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296476675058 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541938488465 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287972613557 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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