Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Since the dawn of civilization, people have been eager to learn about new things. In today's life and with the advent of technology, learning plays an important role in over life. A controversial question which arises here is whether it is better for people to learn by themselves or to have a teacher. When it comes to learning, I am of the opinion that we should always rely of teachers for learning. There are various reasons substantiating my stand point, two of which will be explained hereunder.
First of all, you will learn faster when you have a teacher compared to learning without one, in other word, you can save time by having a teacher. It is due to the fact that a teacher has a learning plan. When you want to learn something, which is unfamiliar to you, it is often the case that you wonder around and do not know even where to begin. However, a teacher knows what he/she is doing and can lead you to the right direction which saves you a lot of time. Furthermore, when it comes to learning something, there are a lot of sources and materials which we can use. We cannot have all of them in our study plan for it is time-consuming and unpractical; besides, most of the time hand picking one could be confusing for us, so we need some experts, teachers, to choose the right material for us.
Secondly, having a teacher will lead to a better understanding of what you want to learn. When learning something new, it might occur to you that you found it hard to understand and even discourage you in studying it any further. It is because you might need some prior knowledge about it before beginning to learn it. A teacher can predict such things and will offer you necessary knowledge which not only does make you learn better but it might also be an incentive to you. In addition, a teacher can give you a neat study plan and give you regular practice which leads to a better learning.
To sum up, although, a lot of people prefer to learn by themselves without the help of others, I strongly believe that learning, you always need a teacher to guide you for not only it does save you a lot of time but also helps you to understand it better.
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...ice which leads to a better learning. To sum up, although, a lot of people pre...
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...ime but also helps you to understand it better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43718592965 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54339003257 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474874371859 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3147507008 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364870464409 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141166606738 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764942204093 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239919208309 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184285807305 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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