Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Always telling the truth in any relationship is really the most important consideration
for many reasons. I could say that when you lie to someone, this person will
not trust you anymore and what is a relationship based on? trust, confidence, so
the sense of relationship is being lost. another point is that if the true is ommited
once, it will surely appear sometime, somewhere and probably in the most unexpected
way, causing lots of problems for the ones involved. so, the truth is the
basis for everything.
First, confidence is the most important aspect of a friendship or a marriage, or
anything like that, so, once it is lost, the whole thing goes down in a way that no
one can bear it. To avoid losing confidence, there is only one way, telling the truth,
lying will just help throwing it away. For example, a couple decided to go out on
the weekend, but the man has a party to go with his friends to where he can not
take his girlfriend and then he lies to her saying that he is sick and can not go to the
date. she undertands him and they do not see each other in that weekend, but he
goes to the party and has much fun. Suppose on monday, the girl talks to a friend
that saw him at the party and asked why did not she go with him. she found out
the true and all confidence was lost, the basis for their relation is now gone and
what happens next is that they break up or if they do not, he will persist on lyes and
someday it will end.
what happened to this couple is very common around here and many relationships,
even friends and marriages end because of something like that. Some
may argue that lying once or another will not interfere anything and it is part of a
relation, but I strongly disagree, the most important thing is the true, even if it is to
determine the end of a relation, it must be told. there are more chances to end
something lying than saying what really happened
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...he sense of relationship is being lost. another point is that if the true is ommited ...
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...e and probably in the most unexpected way, causing lots of problems for the ones ...
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...lots of problems for the ones involved. so, the truth is the basis for everythin...
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...e ones involved. so, the truth is the basis for everything. First, confidence is ...
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...hole thing goes down in a way that no one can bear it. To avoid losing confidence...
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...lling the truth, lying will just help throwing it away. For example, a couple decided ...
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...that he is sick and can not go to the date. she undertands him and they do not see...
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...e is sick and can not go to the date. she undertands him and they do not see each...
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...ee each other in that weekend, but he goes to the party and has much fun. Suppose ...
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...on monday, the girl talks to a friend that saw him at the party and asked why did ...
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... at the party and asked why did not she go with him. she found out the true and ...
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... and asked why did not she go with him. she found out the true and all confidence...
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...y do not, he will persist on lyes and someday it will end. what happened to this co...
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...st on lyes and someday it will end. what happened to this couple is very common ...
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...t thing is the true, even if it is to determine the end of a relation, it must be told....
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...the end of a relation, it must be told. there are more chances to end something lyi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46814404432 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38155629283 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512465373961 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2226987786 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127065368829 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534540358931 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767187704882 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380968856702 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789598234069 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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