Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Which do you prefer?
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of judging a person based on his first impression. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely go with the belief that first impressions are often wrong. It is my firm belief that making judgement precipitately can lead to some blunders, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, initial glance of someone can be misleading. there could a high possibility that the person has fabricated his personality for his gains. Therefore, hiding of the true character can captivate many people, ultimately, resulting in making them get in a trap. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, when I new to my university I fall trap to the first impression theory which made me believe that the people I am surrounded with are of high acumen which made me do to become friend with them and start a project under a faculty. However, as the day passed by I cam to know that they are just average students who have wore a façade on the first day to fool many. As a result, I was alone trapped and have the responsibility to complete the project before the deadline. For this reason, I believe that one should judge a person immediately on the very initial meet.
Secondly, at the very first meet with the person we cannot get the thorough understanding of the person that what are his intentions, his likes etc. For better knowledge of person one needs to spend some quality time and then adjudge his final appraisal. Drawing from my own experience, when my father got transferred to a new city we need to shift our entire home to a new site for which we required help. The neighbours of our new locality were very obliging and willing to help to welcome their new guest which made us believe that we have shifted to a very good place. but after sometime they started showing their real colors and soon we or household items started getting lost, at first we thought that they might be just misplaced but then we caught our neighbour red-handed stealing the items from our home. Moreover, they know exactly where which things are kept in our home which made their process of robbing a facile task. It's certainly clear to see why I support that we should take sometime in making our final judgement of a person as slowly we get to know the real intentions of the person whether he is your enemy or friend.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that first impressions are often an illusion. this is because a person's glance can be misleading which can get us fall into whirlwind of problems and because the first meeting is always insufficient to get to know a person well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62145748988 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063023064 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514170040486 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5095779817 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.15 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268207619933 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077608697052 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499670284636 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175183096593 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405388248863 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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