Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
The famous idiom says "Do not judge a book by its cover". However, many people when they meet a new person often rely on their intuition and the impression created during the first meeting. Although in my eyes, the first impression seems to be rather inaccurate, it often has many common things with the information you will later get.
First, both attitudes are based on the intuition and the mood one has while communicating with the other. Imagine a person you were just introduced. At first, he seems to be non-pleasant and, consequently, the later communication with him will not be enjoyable. There can be a possible logical explanation for that: the visual illustration of an object is more powerful in the subconscious way than other opinions created logically. That is why most people will rely on their first "visual" impression and continue the communication in the same mood. I remember my freshman year when I first met one of my professors. She seemed to me to be a weird person, because of her evil looking smile. Later when I was already familiar with her behavior as a lecturer, I continued to notice only the weird and bad things she had. So I understood the power of the prior impression and how it affects the posterior one.
However, these two attitudes do not always complete each other. Moreover, sometimes they even exclude each other. Another idiom says that a friend is recognized in times of trouble. The first impression can be often defined and validated through time but there can be a stressful situation when the hidden characteristics of the person will appear. Such situations will lead to the alteration of impression about a person. In my experience, I faced that problem sometimes. I trusted one of my colleagues because I thought that we both are displeased from the management. It turned out that he was telling all the secrets I said to him and as a result, the impression about that person was changed from trustful to untrustworthy. That showed that everyone should be prudent with the very first impression.
In conclusion, these two attitudes often work together, but excluding each other is a common practice too. I personally choose to agree with the second attitude. However, it is a difficult psychological question which one is the correct one and the reasons for their appearance can not be exactly known and examined.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96526054591 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95854696458 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531017369727 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6105169817 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.375 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7916666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297431436182 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795563529306 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064469673361 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190681555205 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719349151205 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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