Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Sports teach people lessons about life.
Since the dawn of civilization, exercising has been an important part of people’s life and people have done it for either having fun or remaining healthy. Nowadays advanced technology provides people with many different equipment facilities, which can be used for exercising and doing sports. A vast majority of people are of the opinion that sports are beneficial only for physical and mental health. I, contrary to this belief, content contend that they also teach people lessons about life. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples.
One of the reasons coming to mind at first is that most of the sports teach people how to work in teams. When people participate in a sport team, they have to concentrate on the goal of the team not on their own aim. That teaches people how to respect the rules and goals of teams in any other field of life. Even in sports which the person has to do the match individually such as wrestling or boxing, a couple of people gather as a team and have to behave treat in their team with their coach and other members of the team. Besides, psychological studies borne out that students who do a kind of sport are more likely to make groups for doing their homework or projects at school. On the other hand, Students students who do not take part in any sport groups are more likely to be shy and introverted people.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting my opinion is that sports teach people that every failure can be a road to a new success. The chief point is not to lose the self-confidence and self-esteem. Statistics reveals that a great number of professional sportsmen where were not that much skillful at the beginning; , but they found their weaknesses and improved their skills after every match that they had. If somebody takes these sportsmen as one’s role model, in the long run, he will become a confident and successful person.
The last but not the least point is that sports improves morality in people. Not only are people who do sports are well-behaved, but also they encourage other people to be moral. Sports teach people that winning the game is not the main goal; , but the most important part is to do play an honest and ethical game. As a result, people who do sports are people with honor and respect morality! more than any other thing in the world.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that sports are good teachers for all kinds of people. However, that was a story in a nutshell. Actually, there are a myriad of other reasons and examples supporting this issue which are not mentioned here due to the dearth of time. Finally, it is suggested that a survey be conducted in order to prove the instructive role of sports in people’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Suggestion: Students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, so, well, as to, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2336.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72874493927 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60314973207 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487854251012 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5327147911 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.565217391 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4782608696 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304348869517 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905133234842 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669334003929 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168731799815 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870015618588 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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