In many cultures, teachers play a crucial role in young people’s improvement. From my point of view, teachers have always been an important part of society since they lead the way for the youth in a society and try to make the society a better place to live in.
To start with, teachers are the guide for young adults to find the right way in life. Schools are the first places for kids to see the other part of the world. Before a kid starts his education, the only environment he knows is his family, in other words his parents. As we all know, parents are the first teachers for a kid, and many kids value their first teacher as their parents. Teachers impart knowledge to a kid and work hard to teach everything they know. The first thing to learn for a kid is how to read and write. How come a teacher, the person who taught you how to read and write, might become less appreciated. Moreover, after the basic aspects of education teachers are the one who broaden somebody's perspective towards life. To me, my first teacher in my primary school has always been an important role model because she taught me how to create my ideas in life besides the knowledge. In an article posted in a psychology magazine claims that 95 percent of students still remember their first children after their sixties.
Another point to consider is that teachers indirectly work for a better society. Many people have a career in order to get the money they desire. When it comes to becoming a teacher, it is not the case. The real purpose of a teacher is not only to earn enough money to continue his life, but also to work for a desire for better communities. What I mean is that it is an obvious fact that the pay for primary school teachers is never higher enough to have a comfortable life. In fact, many teachers have a second job in order to get good money. So the question is that why people decide to become a teacher even though they know it is not going to be an easy life for them. The answer is that they usually have an incredible desire to teach the right things to people and affect them to become better persons, and they also affect the community to become a better place. Therefore, their desire has a positive effect on the society.
To sum up, it is the truth that teachers are always valued by the society, and they will always be appreciated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty, and they will always be appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, i mean, in fact, in other words, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44367816092 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36124968313 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473563218391 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1755953717 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8636363636 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7727272727 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107720961931 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364099474253 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275190850454 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802802491048 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127597477863 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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