Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shadow of doubt, teachers has always played a prevailing role in societies. It was because of teachers that contries were able to develop during the pas few years because they are the ones who shape kids to become the work labor for a contry to prosper. As far as I am concerned teachers are a valued in a society and in the foloowing I will delve into the most conpicuous reasons that persuaded me to put forward such an idea.
First and foremost, governments now recognize teachers as the primary influentiors on kids and as a result they invest a huge amount of money to provide for them. This attention to teachers have caused to higher their rak in a society and acknowledge people of their importance so they are valued among individuals. For example, I was watching a documentry about education in finland and in it one of their ministers asserted that teachers have the highest salary in their country. Also he regarded to teachers as one of the most valuable resources in their country which show their higher rank in Finland.
Another point one should take into significant is not long ago parents never knew where their kids are going to school but now a days parents are in close relationship with teachers. This show that parents care about how important a teacher is for their kids life. An instance of this can illustrate my point. When I was going to high school my mother and father would have visited the school regularly. They used to talk to my teachers and trainers regularly asking not only about my grades also about my behavior in the class as the knew even the way my teacher talked to me could change my behaivior. This meetings with teachers caused my parents to hold a higher respect for my teachers.
The last but not the least reason is teachers can shape a kids mental health because kids spend more time with their teachers than their parents. Teachers not only teach students a course but also they teach them about the facts of societies and delinquencies which they shoul avoid. For example I remember when a friend of mine whose name was Billy first encountered with norcatics he never knew what they were but some one gave him some of the chemicals to bring it to school But fortunately my math teacher saw it. He explained to us how such things can cause troubel and how to avoid such traps. Since then I am always gratefull for his caring and hope to compensate it farely.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples advocate the fact that teachers are valued in a sciety as they are the most influential factors for development of a country, parent are in close realtionship with them, and they can preserve students health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66736401674 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5156162186 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495815899582 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4325891583 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.421052632 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1578947368 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171579563375 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549712810531 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439109411098 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11419976821 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462261601672 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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