Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Teachers should give students homework everyday.
Throughout history, we can see so many strategies that are used by teachers to encourage students to learn the lessons in a proper way. some of them use aggressive methods and others prefer to do it in soft ways, but in both methods there is a crucial item which is necessary if they want to breed well-knowledge students, and it is nothing except giving them assignments. In my opinion, teachers ought to give the pupils homework every day. In this essay, I will support my opinion with two reasons.
First, one of the most important tasks of the teachers is motivating students to study, so they can know the principle of the lessons appropriately and get good marks on the final exam. They use so many methods to reach this goal and one of them is to encourage students to practice lessons, which had been studied at the class, at home by doing homework. First, it will help students to review the lecture, so they can understand it better; in addition, it makes a competition between the students and makes them eager to do it in the best way to be the best student in the class. besides these, the students will get great scores on the final exam. I remember we had a mathematic teacher, Mr.zandinejad, he always gave us a lot of homework every session and they were really difficult to be solved, by doing so, he made us to study that particular lesson completely, even from several books, to get enough knowledge to solve the problems, and also it set a competition between us because nobody likes to be the person who can’t do the assignment. At the end of that year when we wanted to take the final exam, which was the National exam and be held at the same time with the same questions all around the country, I and all of my classmates get great grades and that was because of the numerous homework that Mr.Zandinejad had given us. So the assignment is an integral part of the teaching process, And it's good to be with pupils every day.
Secondly, We all know that kids in the ages between 8-16 like to play video games and if they have free time, they immediately push the power button of the video game device, and afterward, even after several hours, parents must use so many strategies to stop them from playing. Now imagine that their teacher gives them homework every day and forces them do to it, can they spend all of their precious times on the video games? We had a member of our family who had a very discipline teacher and he gave them so much homework to do at home; at that time, we used PlayStation a lot, but he couldn't join us because he always had assignments to do. He was angry at those times and he felt that he can’t do anything because of that homework, but now he has his own company he is really successful man.and when I talk to him he said: “what I have got is because of my teacher he taught me to be a Committed person, he learned me how to ignore my inclinations and do what is beneficial for my future and He advised me not to waste my time.” So giving daily homework is great way to eliminate students' tendency to waste their times on video games.
In conclusion, I think some times we should experience some hard times like doing homework during school years if we want to be a successful person in our lives. Since kids don’t understand it in those years, it is the teachers' task to do it for children by giving them homework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 94.0 43.0788530466 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 52.1666666667 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2780.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 625.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.448 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5496922481 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4528 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 875.7 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.04646698 48.9658058833 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.529411765 100.406767564 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7647058824 20.6045352989 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189720870875 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794408651212 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419943021072 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142150969617 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215858077274 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 11.7677419355 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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