Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Getting a job in which you work with other people is better than getting a job in which you work alone.
In today’s modern world, there are plenty of works for people to choose based on their character. There is a controversy amongst different people whether working with other people is good or not. As far as I am mentioned working with other people is far better than working alone. In what follows I will support my stand point.
The advantage of working alone is that people are not forced to tolerate others behavior and no one can distract them or put them under pressure or distract them. So they can keep calm and concentrate on their project. Some people who are not patient and can not cope with others prefer to work alone. For example, my friend is an introverted person who like not to be in contact with people. His field is programming and he needs a silent place to work and he likes to work somewhere in which no one disturbs.
The merit of working with other people is that being suitable for some people who are sociable and they like to be in contact with others and working alone is too boring for them moreover some people are not motivated enough and they are not able to set a time table and finish their project on time. They should be under pressure and they need someone to force or seeing some active colleges every day. This way they work more efficient.
Another privilege of working with other people is working with teams. When people work in a group and face a problem they can solve the problem by getting help from other members and consulting. Each member has a different idea and their point of views are different. More over in groups people share the responsibilities and they are not forced to do many tasks on their own. So they feel relaxed.
In sum, some people are sociable and prefer to get help from others on the other hand some people prefer to work alone. I strongly agree with the statement that asserts getting a job in which a person work with other people is better than getting a job in which a person work alone. in my opinion people should learn to work with others because it boosts their efficiency and motivate people to work better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54736842105 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26820123492 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0038791806 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397024612048 0.236089414692 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138846061441 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14322720591 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259533243096 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135477577856 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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