Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays we live in a vary modern complex world, and it is completely different from the past, due to many changeable values and traits. And one from these value is the teaching process, it is change a lot because there are many resources that students use it for their learning. And from my point of view i disagree with the statement the says the teacher in the past had more value and the people respect them more than now. And the reasons of my view will be analyzed in this essay to further explanation.
first of all, i can define the teacher as a great person that has the best job. which mean as students we relay on them to understand all the vagus and new information. for example when i was in school my favorite subject was science because it talk about interesting topics that i love it. in spite of loving these topics i could not understand all the information in easy way because i do not have enough knowledge or experience. So, my teacher clarify all the unclear information without any effort.
Secondly, although we take the best education, also we take many things. For instance, we learn the importance of the good communication skills and the types of it. like the verbal and the non verbal communication and when to use these forms. Furthermore, they have a good effect on our life. They listen to us when we face personal or social problems and give us the best solutions. So, my teachers values are not change and will never change, and we appreciate their effort a lot as a important part of our morality, because they deserve the best.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is solid and strong enough to illustrate that we appreciate and respect our teachers, because they build our community in best building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59424920128 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59100900911 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5303514377 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2097097543 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154014522183 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479669802148 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610898149423 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872729922246 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533754465853 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.