Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers play an important role in the development and guiding the way of every student so that they get success in their future and reach to their particular aim. The teacher not only guide the students but they also used to motivate and encourage the students so that they do not feel bored to their life. It is my firm believe that teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society also in the present days, for a number of reasons, and i will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, teacher are important in every student life to provide the knowledge, idea and guideline to the students. They are well appreciated by the every society in the present world, as every parents are always thankful over the teacher in the success of their children. The parents used to participate in the teachers day program to express their courtesy for every teachers of the school for providing the better education and motivation. I have to admit that, my opinions on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. I used to teach in the school which is situated near to my apartment. I used to do part time teaching in that school, when i was studying my bachelor program. During the teachers day, the parents of every students came at the school along with their children to celebrate that program. I was not used to with all students, but every parents and student thanks me by giving a bunch of flower and express their courtesy for providing the support t their children. That was the which makes the sense on me that the respect for the teacher in the present day is high from parents and students.
Secondly, the teachers are always called in the different social activities by the people of society in order to provide some ideas, opinion and knowledge regarding to particular activities. The society used to thanks the teacher for their presence in the particular activities and express the respect over them. For instance, my society was going to organized the environmental sanitation program in the society. During that program the teacher from the near school was called in order to provide the brief idea about the program, every society member were convinced by the speech of teacher on the environmental sanitation and they followed as the peacher advised them. So, from this example we can conclude that every society in the present world respect the teacher more and take their advise before carrying different activities.
In the light of above mentioned reasons i strongly disagree with the statement that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. The importance, value and respect for every teacher is still present in the present world society and in my sense it will remain in the future days also.
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...sense it will remain in the future days also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85921325052 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54432224643 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405797101449 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.370022853 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.526315789 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4210526316 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228279433377 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861659774078 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108422855574 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186403363312 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105616009514 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.