People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Travelling is one of the important aspects of the human life as it helps to make the people more fresh, provides enjoyments and makes the known towards the various new places, peoples and society. In the present world situation traveling is seems to be hobby of every people as they likes to travel from one place to another either within their country or to the foreign country. In my prospective, people benefit more from traveling in their own country rather than from traveling to foreign countries mainly because of several reasons which are described below.
Traveling to various places requires the string budget in order to make it more memorable. When people traveling from one place to another place, its cost low for them as compared to traveling to foreign countries. The people can make visit of various places with there limit budget with in their own country because at various places the people belonging to their own nation get the provision of discounted as compare to other countries people. For example, one year ago i traveled to the Namchebazzar which is situated in Nepal. At that time, i have taken the limited budget and i have to utilize it more frugally. But when i reach to my destination i.e. Namchebazzar, i have still sufficient amount of money to further extend my traveling destination. During the period of travel i have stayed at different lodges, taken tiffin at different places but i got discount at every places, the main reason is that i am the citizen of Nepal. The hotels and lodges makes the better discount to the Nepalese citizen. So, due to this reason i extend my destination to the Everest Base Camp with my limited budget.
Traveling in own country makes the sense of common environment, familiar people and better support from the everyone. The language is also almost common, the people are also well known to the different structure of government structure that makes them easy to contact with different government offices or services during the emergency situation.This kinds of environment is generally not common in the foreign countries due to infamilar or the new environment. For example, when i traveled to Khaptad area of my own country Nepal which is situated in the western part i got troubled at my journey that i suddenly feeled weak and suffered from Diahrroea. At that condition i make the contact with the police officer and they helps to get me into the hospital. I make me more easy communication with them due to the same language and citizen of my own country.
To sum it is more beneficial to make the travel of own country rather than foreign country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63248087468 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426666666667 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2142557263 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.166666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465355925866 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165318959484 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166203949037 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35590139035 0.150856017488 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142014606838 0.0645574589148 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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