Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Author claims that government should place few restrictions on scientific research development. Different people have different views; as topic is debatable. In my opinion, scientific research and development are important in the present world and there shouldnot any restriction on it, so, I am disagree with the author claim.
Scientific research and development has great role in the development of the different technology, that results the easier in carried out the various activities in different field. For example, the communication technology development and advancement in the world results the better connection of the people even though they are far from each other. The communication research and development results in the advancement in internet services which is important in every sectors- banking, education, health and so on- that makes the work easier, faster and convenient. So, scientific research and development makes the peoples everyday easier.
Similarly, there is great challenge to meet the food requirement of the present world population. The scientific research and development plays the important role in the development of the new technology and ideas to make the better increase production of the agriculture products. For example, the scientific research and development results in the development of the high yielding variety of the different crops, which gives higher yield than that of the conventional variety and helps in meeting the food requirement of the world. Similarly, the advancement in the mechanization - tractor, harvester, driller, water pump/generator and so on - of the agriculture areas results in the better use of the available lands, reducing in the loss of crop during harvesting, makes easier to carried out different cultural practices; that ultimately results in more production in the short period of time.
At last but not least, the scientific research and development makes easier to control the various crimes around the world. For example, the development of the CC-camera in the present world are widely used in the capturing the various activities in the different sectors - schools, banks, government offices, etc- that provides the true evidences of the different crimes occuring in these areas such as bank robbery, hand to hand corruption in the offices, etc.
In sum, the scientific research and development plays the significant role in the present world, so, government should not restrict it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 377.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58620689655 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0706545992 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445623342175 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6693007639 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.428571429 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22909840564 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121429717826 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185910792817 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182045234873 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137694119696 0.0667264976115 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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