Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the teachers are more appreciate and value today than teachers in the past, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the teachers are more appreciate today than the teachers in the past because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that today the teacher’s effectiveness is the single greatest determinant for the student success. The life today is very hard and that force the parents to spend long hours in the work everyday and that make them so tiered when they back home. So, have no time to help their children in their duties. However, the parents and the teachers in the past had equal role in the students’ life.
Another point why I advocate the great value of the teachers today is the rapid development in the technology. The technology today provides different ways of education and a lot of sources. So, the teachers with their experience can help the student to increase their knowledge by simplest way. However, the parents lack the teaching experience and they misleading their children.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that we are all intentional at some level, but the teachers today help the students to target their plans, instructions, interaction and vision toward truly improving the achievement. On the other hand, the teacher role was very limited in the past.
From what has been discussed above we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold opposite site may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions, are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...parents to spend long hours in the work everyday and that make them so tiered when they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95440729483 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67470986388 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544072948328 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2358953231 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188240525001 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689800338782 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756623267785 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917649984851 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950479210496 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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