Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The teaching process has developed a lot recently. And the government has a special consideration towards the educational methods, and spent huge amount of money to improve it. Moreover we can notice the government effort by respect and appreciate the teachers.And in my point of view the teachers values nowadays are very better than the past, and the impact of this view will be analyzed in this essay to further explanation.
First of all, the most respectful person is the teacher, because he has the key for new generation and he is responsible to build the future by convey all what he has from information, knowledge, and science to their students. Also, he is responsible to correct the student behaviors and mistakes. For example, when i was in the school i got low mark in my exam and my teacher sat with me and told me how to solve and study in right way, and on my second exam i got the highest mark because i followed my teacher advice.
Secondly, in the past the teachers were overwhelmed by doing many activity with very low salary While now the teachers income is better. For instance, my grandmother was a teacher and her salary not more 20$. Whereas now my mother is a teacher and took more than 800$.So, that is mean the value of our teachers have been improved. Because when the government increase the economic status for the teachers this will effect on their performance and will work more harder.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to illustrate that our teachers value are in the safe side and we cannot decrease our respect to them. And we should take them as a role model in our life and we have to follow their steps to be the most successful version in this world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59485530547 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58312853209 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.494353851 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152540793396 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557513251242 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526134661285 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901210880814 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574687632274 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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