Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The extended family( grandparents, causins, aunts and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past
Since the dawn of humanities, social interactions have been one of the critical factor which have an wide effect on the humans life. Among these, relatives are very important in ereyone lives. When it comes to this point, people have some debates as to whether people have more contact with their family nowadayes or in the past. Personally, I agree with latter group and in what follows, two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that today poeple are very busy and the working time of modern human is higher than in the past. Therefore poeple do not have enough time inorder to spend their time with their relatives. In addition, in the past people lived near to each other in the village so the distance between them was very low. For example, my family lived in the scenic village which 200 people lived in there. My grandmother and my aunt setteled in this area so every day we saw each other on the farm land and in order to make our needs. But after a while we migrated to a far city which we should work as an employee and we have not any spare time to see each other.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that the economic condition is wery difficult. In other word, modern humans can not invited guests to their home because the high cots of living. wealthy families are more able to visit their relatives if they want.
Last but not least, Our profet Mohammad told a lot about the advantages of seeng the relatives. In addition scichologists reveal a lot of benefits of this kind of relationship like the effect of this on the human mind and to decreas the human stress but people ignor this iussue because of the personal conditions.
To sum up, based on all argumentations states above, I belive that today people ignor their relatives because the high hours of working and the low income and. I hope that people know more about the merrits of this kinds of relashionship and put their effort to make their cennection stronger.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...odern human is higher than in the past. Therefore poeple do not have enough time inorder ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6277173913 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39710111385 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551630434783 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4419042487 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080539896555 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271145359117 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281376432617 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037048767459 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380631225504 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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