Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
It is undeniable that celebrities have some influence on the public's opinions on multiple aspects of life. However, the extent of that impact varies to each group of people depending on their age. To my view, young people are more affected by the statements of famous stars than older ones for the following reasons
First of all, young people have as sufficient knowledge and experience to have their own point of view as older people. The lives of most adolescents are associated with study, friends and family, and culture while only few pay attention to social or political problems. Therefore, the majority do not have enough knowledge and information about a matter on heated debate and simply imitate the perspectives of the most influential people to them, which usually are well-liked actors, singers, or athletes. An illustration is my cousin, who is now in her teenage. During the campaign for presidency in the US two years ago, I asked her what she thought about the two candidates, Donald Trump and Hillary Clinton. She immediately said that her side was with Clinton. But to my subsequent question for her reason, she explained that she like Clinton more because many of her favorite singers like Taylor Swift or Beyoncé stated the same on Twitter.
In addition, young people are more keen on famous entertainers than athletes. Apparently, famous people look more glamorous to young people than older ones, who have known more successful people than those entertainers and athletes. Idols of those in their teens and twenties are usually popular singers, actors or sports stars while the seniors admire successful businessmen, scientists or politicians. It is obvious that the young are more fascinated by the top achievers in interesting fields like pop culture, movie or sports, than social or political ones. However, as time passes, people would realize that the entertainment world is relatively superficial. Eventually, the elderly grow out of their interest in the fancy of entertainers and begin to recognize and appreciate the viewpoint of people with real knowledge and insight of the matter.
Finally, busy life is also a factor why older people are quite indifferent and therefore not persuaded by the big names in the showbiz. Teenagers and college students have a plenty of free time for their hobbies like pursuing idols. Meanwhile, as the world nowadays is intensely competitive and extremely harsh, people are required work industriously. Most people have to work hard for more than official eight hours a day to maintain an adequate life for themselves and family. For example, my parents and most of other seniors that I know barely recognize any entertainment star nor want to care about them as hey are already too occupied with their career and family.
In conclusion, it seems to me that celebrities have more impact on the young than the elderly. However, I think young people should try to evaluate a problem objectively instead of blindly following their stars' viewpoints.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2534.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13995943205 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75405002571 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4443888221 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4090909091 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245489896765 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072709828657 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821145882728 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143748209886 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697941628381 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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