Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two slides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusion. After all, each and every question requires careful deliberation in that there are multiple variable to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe educational institutin such as Universities should increase the professors salay in order to enhance the quality of education, I strongly believe this opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, professors who work at Universities their salary should be due to the following reasons.
First and foremost, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that improving the university professors can engender a myriad of advantages. The main reason behind this rationale is that the professors will work more effectively because your are giving them more money, which would incentive them to do a good work. In addition to this, professor could use this money to do research and experiments even subscribe in educatiola websites, which would increase their knowledge. To illustrate more thoroughly, my uncle Ahmad is a professor at the University of manitoba, he used to get 1000$ per month, so he was always a little bit upset about his salary. However, last month he received a new offer and he will get 3000$ per month. Moreover, this thing reflected on his personality he felt more confident. Therfore, the student noticed that he has impoved his teaching ways, so the student felt more comfortable. All in all we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of increasing university professsor salay.
On top of this, spending less money on professors salary can result in unfavourable ramifications. In the eyes of many people in present day society, professor are an important part of the community. Moreover, disrespecting these professor and giving them low salaries will have a big impact on our students, which will effect their quality of education. A great example of this would be my friend Jack who has been studying in the Univeriry of Jordan last year. last year in his graduation semester he has been taking physics class, the university alerted the professor Mark because he used to help students to overcome the difficulties in his class. However, the students droppeed this class because the professor Jack changed his way of teaching as well as the student got bad grades in the second exam. Long story short , it's clear as day to me giving low salary to the unviersity professors can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to and open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors due to the following reasons and details mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, well, after all, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10234541578 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8497686801 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 756.9 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5423009588 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.952380952 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226616697654 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634986027331 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717648376423 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152410682513 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540919592895 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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