Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everything in life is like a coin with two different sides, people should weigh the pros and cons before jumping to the conclusion. After all, each and everything of the question and the topic requires careful deliberation in that there are multiple variables to the truth. Even though some people may disagree with the statement that, workers are more satisfied when they have many types of tasks to do in a workday , I strongly believe that such opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, I think that workers enjoy more by doing different tasks rather than the same tasks the whole day.
First and foremost, majority of the people agree to this notion that, carrying out the same activity the whole day brings a lot of boredom to the workers. Doing the same work and tasks daily and following the same schedule would not bring any enjoyment in the workers. Moreover, they will not get any encouragement in doing the work. Similar tasks lowers the enthusiasm among the people. To be more clear, Similar tasks will hence, lower the concentration and the energy in the people to perform the tasks. To illustrate the example thoroughly, my brother works in an IT company, they are usually supposed to do the same tasks daily which usually discourages them to perform well and complete their assignments with more enthusiasm. Rather on the weekends they are given new tasks which not only brings them more energy but also, they perform well. Carrying out the same tasks decreases the work efficiency among the workers. All in all, we can't and should not carry out the similar tasks as it decreases the working tendency and also the workers take their tasks as a burden.
On top of this, it is mostly said that the people at present are more enthusiastic towards their work. Furthermore, workers are eager to perform different tasks given to them which not only brings out more competition among each other but also they are more energetic towards their work. In this modern era, although the people are more dependent on the latest technology but people feel more entertaining when they do different tasks. Who would see such inventions made by the scientists like the telephone or the cars? Would ever anybody notice people who do the same tasks and not do something different ? Would more people come and do their assignments with more enthusiasm if they have to do the same thing again and again? Answer to these questions is 'NO'. Many famous personalities like the Bill gates, did something different from their daily work or tasks which led them to carry out some innovative inventions which is at present impossible to live without. Long story short, it is clear as a day to me that carrying out different tasks is more satisfying to the workers rather than doing the similar tasks all day long. Hence, it is appropriately stated that " All progress takes place outside the comfort zone".
In summation, yes it is virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to a open-ended question. Although, the jury may be out on this topic but, we can come to a mutual argument on the topic that, it is more satisfying for the workers to carry out different tasks in a day rather than following the same schedule daily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, after all, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2699.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8110516934 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5193965329 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427807486631 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 835.2 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9623547337 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.96 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.44 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416527556825 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124709063989 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983775929444 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27030323288 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886879639946 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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