Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy the life more than older people do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Both young and old people want to enjoy their lives. Going out to visit the world, having fun with some delicious food, watching movie, dancing, playing are some ways to enjoy temporal human life. I think old people cannot involve themselves in activities to enjoy like the young people. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, food is one of the main sources from which people can find enjoyment of life. We know that good food is the prerequisite for celebration in our life. My own life is a compelling example for this. I am a food loving person and always cook tasty foods and invite my friends to enjoy it together. I consider food as the greatest blessing from God. That’s why, I feel sorry for the person who cannot eat these tasty and yummy foods because of their disease like diabetes, high blood pressure, heart disease etc. I also cannot imagine having a life when certain types of foods will be restricted to me. Young people enjoy their life as they suffer less from diseases that are much common among older persons.
Secondly, traveling and watching the movie outside are another means to enjoy the life. Older people are not able to travel all places because of their physical problems and they do not have the desire to watch movie. For instance, my grandfather loved to climb mountains but due to his age he cannot do that anymore. On the other hand, he could easily climb to mountains in his early ages. So, age is the obstacle to chill in later ages.
Finally, an inclination to God is another reason for which old people do not have the desire for fun. Generally, it is practiced by people in their old ages, not in early periods. My grandmother used to go to cinema halls with her friend to enjoy movies for recreation when she was young but now she is very busy with the religious activities. It is seen that people tend to be religious in their old ages because they fear the death. So, because of physical inability and religion, old people can’t enjoy life in later ages.
To wrap up, young people can enjoy their life compared to the old people as they have physical soundness, low aged and less concern for religion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61772151899 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29512067518 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521518987342 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9749713281 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3043478261 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1739130435 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244717419676 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782623570564 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560292492798 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155810554281 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310443363248 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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