Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
When it comes to the issue of young people nowadays o not give enough time to help their communities, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people disagree. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the young people have a great chance to supports their communities. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my view.
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the young people have enough time to help their communities now. The wide spread of the social media make the communication between different people and organizations more easily. Eventually, this make it easier for the young individual to know the social events and take part in it in order to help their communities.
Another reason why I advocate that the young people have a great chance to serve their communities now is the television programs. There are many television programs now talking about the social problem and give us the way to solve them for instance , the program which talking about the refugee problems. So, such program will make the young people focus on the real problems in their society and trying to help instead of wasting their time and efforts looking for the way to help their society by it.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the schools now make different groups to serve the environmental. So, Students can participate with such groups to serve their society. When the schools arrange such groups they give the chance to take a part in helping their society without effecting on their study.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people’s opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93808049536 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61096335279 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513931888545 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3292992076 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316415595931 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112359216174 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112559421457 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170077082788 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101274441575 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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