Throughout history, youngs have always had a pivotal role in the growth and prosperity of societies. However, nowadays their role became a little challenging, they steal are crucial people in any generation. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether young people's accessibility to the vital decisions in society became diminish these days or not. Some people are inclined toward the idea that experienced people do not permit young to make important decisions. I despite the general consensus, contend that they have definitely enormous effect on society. In what follows, I will aptly elucidate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that despite a key person in any society have to make the final decision, they always have young consultants who guide them to have the right decisions. An example will illustrate this point better. Almost in every country around the world, presidents have a team containing young scholars in order to participate in a crucial meeting with the governments’ high ranked individuals.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that since young people are up to date and possess a fresh mind, they can alter societies' lifestyles. According to the statistics conducted by the United States government, over 90 percent of novel ideas which change the routine lifestyles in the societies are originated from youngs, 20 to 30 years old people. For instance, inventing the FaceBook by Mark Zuckerberg, a young scholar lived in the USA, has changed people's lifestyle in almost whole the world.
In addition, it is true that these days’ olds have the tendency to remain in the power, but it was similar in the past days, and with this condition youngs always had important effects on societies. Results of a recent study conduct by the University of Oklahoma reveals that even in ancient Egypt, kings had remained in power until the last day of their life, which were about 90 years old. So it is not a new issue to human society.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, as soon realizes that the role of youngs in vital decisions in society is undeniable. However, there are a lot of points worth mentioning that are not mentioned here. Nevertheless, that was a story of a nutshell. Obviously, there are many details that are effective about the role of young in the society. At last, it is highly recommended to read key persons' biographies who changed their society in past times, to get familiar with their lifestyles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
...make important decisions. I despite the general consensus, contend that they have definitely enor...
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended reading'.
Suggestion: recommended reading
...g in the society. At last, it is highly recommended to read key persons biographies who changed the...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, in brief, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06650831354 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83983807532 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558194774347 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0577878233 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.65 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181468028805 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051035702691 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418115099769 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100270746305 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338036187726 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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