Barely can someone deny that how to spend leisure time is important issue. Following that, what activities should be involved in our free time has become a highly controversial topic of discussion. Although one notion is that physical activities such as going to the gym are a pleasant way for relaxation, to be the best of my knowledge, I subscribe to the theory that either watching a movie or reading a book is a better choice for relaxing since they can both reduce daily life stress and teach us practical matters.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that watching movies or reading books can reduce daily life stress and lead to forgetting the real-world concerns. In other words, books and films both are the best entertainments that can engage our imagination. Telling us some stories which are sometimes different from the real world, books and movies can embed people in an imaginary world with which everyone can forget daily life problems. For instance, I love fantasy films such as Avengers or Harry Potter. When I am watching them, I feel I am disconnected from the real world, and I forget my tough situations, even for a few hours. Moreover, watching these kinds of movies refresh my energy, so after watching them, I have a better concentration on my work.
The second noteworthy reason is that books and movies can teach us something helpful to implement in our life. There are many precious books out there that give us highly valuable advice, so we can use them when encountering problems. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. There was a time that I was not reading books in my free time. A friend of mine suggested a book called "The rules of life." After reading the book, I have learned many useful things that I used to solve everyday problems. Therefore, I allocated more and more time to read in my leisure time. Then I realized how reading could be helpful in my life. If I had not read that book, I would never have understood the value of reading in my life.
Thus, with the above in mind, not only can watching a movie and reading book help us to forget the routine issues, but also they can teach valuable things to use in our life. Therefore, it is strongly suggested that people dedicate more of their free time to read books and watch movies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65476190476 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56733691222 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495238095238 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4733115964 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.894736842 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1052631579 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157676715933 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554075983384 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420842743409 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11338654925 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196095253638 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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