Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons.
From very long time ago human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find a proper and efficient way to spend their leisure time, since it plays a crucial role in improving their mood and relieving stress. In this regard, some people prefer to relax by watching movies or reading books. Others like to do physical exercise. I, personally, subscribe to the later one for a number of reasons, two of which are of great importance compared to others, and are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, doing exercise provides people an opportunity to get in touch with other people. In the modern world today with its unexampled development in technology the hustle and bustle life style of people prevent them from having a face to face communication with others. Concerning this, physical activities, which often take place in outdoor places, pave the way for people to get acquainted with a lot of people and help them feel energetic. Hence, by doing so, they can forget about their problems and overcome anxiety. For instance, I remember when I was studying at university in another city, I used to go to a park to jog every weekend. It helped me a lot, because I get familiar with a lot of people there, and after stressful days of studying, in this way I used to get refreshed and feel happy and lively the entire week. On the other side, reading books and watching movies do not have these privileges.
Having discussed the issue from previous perspective I would rather look at it from another point of view. People can lead a healthy life by doing physical exercise. They breathe the fresh air of outside and enjoy the tranquility of various parks. The importance of this issue is more obvious in the modern world today that various kinds of diseases and disorders like cancers, obesity and diabetes have made the people of this era confront quite a bit of serious problems. According to statistics the rate of heart disease and mortal cancers are drastically less among those people who participate regularly in physical activities. On the other hand, these benefits concerning health care issues cannot be achieved in activities such as watching movies and reading books.
In summary, by considering all above-mentioned arguments it can be concluded that doing physical exercises in leisure time is more beneficiary in comparison with watching movies and reading books. Not only does it provide the chance to contact with other people, but also it has some invaluable merits concerning health care issues. Thus, everyone should consider exercise as an important part in their daily schedule.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, thus, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96363636364 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63982531353 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565909090909 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5820865588 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198180653996 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726348612089 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823109033935 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125059199342 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208006659139 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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