Do you agree or disagree? People meet many problems in their daily life and they can solve them by themselves or with the help of their families, so the help from the government is not necessary.
Since the down of humanity, problems have been an inseparable part of the life of human beings. Sometimes people depends on other's help in order to tackle the problems. In this regard, some people think that one can solve his or her problems themselves or with the help of their families. Others think that government's help is necessary. I, personally, subscribe to the later one based on the grounds that I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, some large scale policies should be set by the government, since only the government have the necessary power and authority. It is crystal clear that the general well-fair and prosperity of a society depends drastically on the economical, political and cultural conditions of that society. On the other hand, government is a fundamental organ of a country that decides about the most determining aspects of the life of the people. Hence, government’s policies have a strong impact on people's life. For instance, when in a society youngsters are dealing with a great struggle to find a job, the most effective solutions can be provided by government. Government should take some practical actions in order to facilitate the economical growth and industrialization of the society. Thus, in such a situation young people will not confront a problem finding a job after graduation. In contrary, this problem is incredibly hard to solve by the people themselves.
Secondly, government's help plays a crucial role in the solidarity of the country. Does government support people in their daily life problems, people feel a great devotion to their country and it leads to a complete alliance between people and their government. By doing so, people will always support their government in the critical situations at the global level. Hence, it is a subtle way for governments to have the trust, reliance and support of the people. Actually, this is the main reason why every government promises people that it will solve their daily life problems during the elections.
In summary, taken all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, it can be concluded that government should play a part in solving people's daily life problems, for not only it has the needed power and authority which makes the solution more effective, but also it leads to the popularity of the government among people. All in all, government owes its power to the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ical actions in order to facilitate the economical growth and industrialization of the soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14430379747 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95892513299 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501265822785 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4014340577 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353147821738 0.236089414692 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106177242361 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928171735055 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21871390488 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102635687851 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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