Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find effective and efficient ways to improve the quality of their life in various grounds. Definitely there are a lot of ways that can help people improve their lives. I, personally, believe that the best method to have a better life is through participating in physical activities for a great number of reason two of which are of great importance compared to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, doing more exercise provides people an opportunity to lead a healthy life style both physically and mentally. In the modern world today with its unexampled progress in science and technology, the hectic life style of people make them pay less attention to their physical health. Having a regular plan for doing exercise plays a crucial role in avoiding fatal diseases and disorders like obesity and diabetes. According to studies conducted in one of the high ranked universities of United States the rate of heart disease is incredibly high in people who do not have enough physical activities. Moreover, attending the physical activities paves the way to have a happier attitude, since people who exercise have generally better mood and behave kindly toward other people. Doing exercise help them to relieve stress, forget about their problem and overcome anxiety. Hence, in this way they can improve their life dramatically.
Having discussed the issue from the previous perspective I would look at it from another point of view. People who care about doing exercise tend to be more sociable, since the exercise gives them the opportunity to get familiar with a lot of people and be in touch with them, especially by participating in sport group activities. They get acquainted with new people, which enjoy new perspectives. Through group activities they learn how to share and exchange ideas, and cooperate and collaborate with each other to achieve the best outcome and win the matches. Besides, they can practice some essential skills like persistence and perseverance, and learn how to make decision in critical situations, which help them ensure they future as a successful individual. Thus, doing exercise helps them gain some social and personal qualities.
In summary, taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration it can be concluded that doing more exercise benefit people, and help them improve their life. Not only can they lead a healthy life in both physical and mental grounds, but also will be provided with the chance of acquiring some social skills, which help them be successful in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 743, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24057971014 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71205233971 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4844528852 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214326501576 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080037071964 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789433015841 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163194818101 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663843490149 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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