Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find effective and efficient ways to improve the quality of their life in various grounds. Definitely there are a lot of ways that can help people improve their lives. I, personally, believe that the best method to have a better life is through participating in physical activities for a great number of reason two of which are of great importance compared to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find effective and efficient ways to improve the quality of their life in various grounds. Definitely there are a lot of ways that can help people improve their lives. I, personally, believe that the best method to have a better life is through participating in physical activities for a great number of reason two of which are of great importance compared to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, doing more exercise provides people an opportunity to lead a healthy life style both physically and mentally. In the modern world today with its unexampled progress in science and technology, the hectic life style of people make them pay less attention to their physical health. Having a regular plan for doing exercise plays a crucial role in avoiding fatal diseases and disorders like obesity and diabetes. According to studies, conducted in one of the high ranked universities of United States, the rate of heart diseases is incredibly high in people who do not have enough physical activities. Moreover, attending the physical activities paves the way to have a happier attitude, since people who exercise have generally better mood and behave kindly toward other people. Doing exercise help them to relieve stress, forget about their problem and overcome anxiety. Hence, in this way they can improve their life dramatically.
Having discussed the issue from the previous perspective I would rather look at it from another point of view. People who care about doing exercise tend to be more sociable, since the exercise gives them the opportunity to get familiar with a lot of people and be in touch with them, especially by participating in sport group activities. They get acquainted with new people, which enjoy new perspectives. Through group activities they learn how to share and exchange ideas, and cooperate and collaborate with each other to achieve the best outcome and win the matches. Besides, they can practice some essential skills like persistence and perseverance, and learn how to make decision in critical situations, which help them ensure they future as successful individuals. Thus, doing exercise helps them gain some social and personal qualities.
In summary, taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration it can be concluded that doing more exercise benefits people, and helps them improve their life. Not only can they lead a healthy life in both physical and mental grounds, but also will be provided with the chance of acquiring some social skills, which helps them to be successful in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20046620047 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72000106434 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526806526807 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6676829174 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394692940444 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146108803602 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20650909212 0.0737576698707 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291935896002 0.150856017488 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230420072157 0.0645574589148 357% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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