which one do you prefer? Why?
1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
Since a long time ago, human beings have been involved in a great struggle to find an appropriate job which brings the power of obtaining essential needs and job-satisfaction. In today's modern world, however, there is heated controversy over how to schedule the leisure time alongside one’s job. In this regard, some people believe that a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days is better that a job with less interesting project with more vacation days, others believe otherwise. I, personally, subscribe to the later one for a couple of reasons, two of which are of great importance compared to others, which are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and foremost, having more vacation leads to better and stronger family relations. It is crystal clear that family plays a crucial role in social solidarity of any given society. With this in mind, people need to pay more attention to maintain a warm atmosphere in their home. Especially, in the modern world today that people have devoted their entire life to the hustle and bustle life style that has deprived them of their intimacy. Hence, having more vacation days provides individuals the opportunity to spend time with their family. Moreover, a simpler career with less challenging tasks can be done more conveniently, which help the workers not to engage their mind with the tough complex problems and enjoy their time with their families.
Having discussed the issue from the previous perspective I would rather look at it from another point of view, providing more vacation days help employees boost their performance and have more efficiency. Being away from their workplace in a tension-free environment helps them to relieve stress dramatically and gives them the chance to rest some. It may be claimed that a job with less challenging projects is doomed to get monotonous after a while, but we should not ignore the fact that a project which has been done completely and correctly is worth more than an incomplete challenging project. History has shown us that the hugest breakthroughs have taken place in simple errands rather than complicated cases, which require a tranquil environment away from stress.
In summary, with all above-mentioned arguments it can be concluded that having a job with less challenging projects but more vacation days is better that a job with more interesting projects and less vacation days, since not only it paves the way for strengthening the family relationship, but also it helps employees to relieve stress and get refreshed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18028846154 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81506601385 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521634615385 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.413124147 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297148782652 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100974360379 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107770174516 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215499046837 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877590566002 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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