Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, the galloping rate in which science and technology are flourishing and the unexampled development of society have modified the essence of human life. In the hustle and bustle life style of today, most people believe that having the ability to plan and organize is really essential for young people. I, personally, agree with this statement for a couple of reasons which I will explain hereunder.
First and foremost, an organized and disciplined person has a disciplined mind. People who are capable of planning for their goals and activities can easily picture their future. According to studies those who have a permanent habit of planning are more likely to feel determined and reach their goals on time. In addition, regarding the hectic life style of the today's modern life having an already scheduled life decrease the stress and tension dramatically, since with a precise plan one can be sure that he or she will be able to perform their tasks in due time, and can concentrate on the duties in an convenient manner. Hence, having a disciplined behavior plays a vital role in the life of the young generation.
Secondly, today, there are a lot of diverse tasks that one should do in order to have a decent life. Today, the complex structure of the modern world has led the young generation to confront quite a few problems concerning time management. In addition, a lot of young people are competing to occupy the best positions in society, which acquires a huge amount of effort and time. Therefore, it is crucial to keep pace with the astounding progress of the modern world. It is crystal clear that reaching all these goals and being able to manage these huge amount of errands need a precise plan that assures the person to finish his or her duties.
In summary, with all this taken in to account, it can be concluded that having the ability to plan and organize is really important for the young people, for not only does it help them have an organized mind, but also paves the way to tackling the huge amount of works. The new generation should definitely consider gaining this skill.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an convenient manner" with adverb for "convenient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...time, and can concentrate on the duties in an convenient manner. Hence, having a disciplined behavior p...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e, and can concentrate on the duties in an convenient manner. Hence, having a disc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8087431694 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53862044174 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521857923497 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7251307369 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252643415831 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833699547143 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603628340929 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159648562146 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510316306952 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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